Scenes will be filmed in the following order:
1. Classrooom scenes
2. Band performance
3. CCTV and school gate shots.
Whilst looking at the style of these bands I noticed key features such as spiked up hair, wristbands, studded belts and torn clothing. To get the correct mise en scene for my video I will use this kind of style on the band and lead character in my video.
After looking on MySpace I didn’t find a song that I would like to use so I looked at the songs on my recent playlist. After going through songs I noticed the Sex Pistols have a message that is relevant to the idea’s I have for my video. I would like to base my video on anarchy and portray individuality through the lead character. The song I have chosen will allow me to use these ideas as it has the same kind of theme, this song is 'Schools are Prisons' which does not already have a music video. It is from the punk genre so I will be using some conventions similar to those in punk videos.The song is about how education takes away the years we can never get back and doesn't actually teach you how to stand on your own two feet outside of school and how to feel free. I like the idea of the song as I have seen articles related to the topic 'Schools are being turned into "prisons" as children are subjected to increasingly sophisticated surveillance and security measures,' (reference to an article).
I would like to use a simple storyline in my video as a complicated one distracts from the visual impact and lyrics of the song. To show the message of the song and express the depth of the lyrics I have decided to base the video around a male teenager in school who is sick of feeling trapped inside school. As the lyrics imply lack of freedom I will show examples of entrapment through the lead character. The video will start with close up shots of fences around the school will show how the students are trapped inside. This then cuts to a typical classroom, modern day setting. Teenage boy is bored of the lesson and begins daydreaming, and this then cuts to more shots of fences in front of outside of the school and shots of CCTV cameras will make the school seem as though the students are being watched the way prisoners are. One student comes late and before the teacher allows him to enter the lesson he is being stopped and searched the same way a prisoner is. The students will be wearing modern punk wear to represent their individuality and also a development of punk in the 21st century. Shots of students messing around in the classroom will show them breaking free from rules signifying anarchy. As my video will be both performance based and narrative based I will have shots of a band playing in a small room to enhance the portrayal of entrapment. High angle shots will make it look as if the band are being caught on camera which sybolises the security measures used in prisons. i will possibly use shots of students behind the fences will make them seem like prisoners behind bars or close-up shots of students singing the lyrics 'schools are prisons' to show a students response of feeling trapped in school. At the end the lead character is shown trying to escape and goes on top of a roof, from there he throws down papers from his school work, this shows him breaking free from education and portrays anarchy through the character. Other students climb on the roof following the boys example and begin having fun with him. A shot of the papers falling down in slow motion will finish the video.
The video I am analysing is by Bullet for my Valentine called ‘All These Things I Hate’. The video was directed by Scott Winig, the song is released as the third single from their debut album The Poison in 2006. The band generally falls under the genre of Metal/Screamo. This song features their usual screamo vocals but is the softest on The Poison album.
The video follows the typical conventions of a rock/metal video as it is both narrative based and performance based, there is a story going on and also shots of the band performing. Another convention typically used for videos of this genre is the gothic wear, the band and the characters all wear dark clothing, the lead characters also have many tattoos and dark hair matching the bands costume. The characters may match the band to show that they are reflecting the bands experiences in their story. The video depicts a series of what seems like predictions made by a young woman. It starts off showing the outside of a motel and then cuts inside to show a young couple. After saying goodbye to his girlfriend the boy leaves the room, walks out onto the driveway, and gets into his car. His girlfriend realises he has left his necklace behind so goes after him. As soon as he pulls out onto the road he is slammed into by a truck and killed. This appears to be a nightmare though up by the girlfriend. This relates to the title of the song ‘all these things I hate’. These series of events repeat a few times, with minor variations each time.
Throughout the video we see a wide range camera shots, the most frequent shot used would be close-up shot, mainly on the lead singer, and this may have been done to show that he is narrating the story in the video. Close ups are used also on the girlfriend to show her reaction to what happens which is key in this story. Mid shots are also used many times to show the whole band so they become more recognisable with the audience.
The song starts of soft and slow in pace to match the characters performance but gets much louder and faster when the action begins, e.g. when the truck slams into the boyfriend’s car. The music returns to its slow pace when the girlfriend wakes up and realises this was a nightmare and this happens throughout the video, this shows the video changing pace with the music. The same events happen constantly throughout the video, one part shows a range of shots playing one after the other at a high speed to show that the same thing keeps happening. It also shows a clear link to the title ‘all these things I hate’, the girlfriend hates seeing her boyfriend get killed and is forced to see it in a nightmare over and over. When a solo in the song is played, the video begins showing fast cuts matching the beat of the guitar.
When the lyrics ‘Torn apart at the seams and my dreams turn to tears’ play, a shot of the girlfriend getting up to chase after her boyfriend is shown. This illustrates the lyric as she starts off happy with her boyfriend and then ends up in tears when her boyfriend is killed. At one point slow motion is used when the truck slams into the car which shows a significant relationship to the lyrics ‘all these things I hate’. One of the final shots is of the girlfriend looking out a window and seeing the truck that would have killed her boyfriend pass by. However, the boyfriend is not there. The band is playing in a graveyard throughout the whole video and ends with the lead singer crouching over what seems to be the coffin of the boyfriend. There is a lot of camera movement particularly on the band which is a typical feature in rock metal videos like Guns 'N Roses 'Sweet child of Mine'. It highlights the importance of the band while promoting them and allowing the audience to get used to them.